Essay 2: Revise your first analysis essay. Revision is not copyediting and simply correcting the errors that were marked by your classmates or me. Revising also requires substantive portions of new text as you develop and support the points you are making.
Look at your essay from the perspective of a reader who does not know all that you do. How can you make this even clearer and more effective for your reader? Have you used specific examples from the text, or examples from your own experience that would add weight to your analysis?
At the end of the essay, on a separate page, describe your revision process. See the worksheet in the Content area to answer specific questions.