Critique given two drafts.
Deconstruct the stories and evaluate individual fictional elements, especially those parts that we have been paying special attention to:
•Point of view
•Character development
•Plot
•Dialogue
•Setting
•Theme
Remember that this is a work in progress, and all comments should be both specific and constructive in nature.
Dedicate at least one full paragraph to each of the noted elements of fiction.
Attachment:- story 1.rar
Attachment:- story 2.rar