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In a discussion what would be some new knowledge gain from the discussion below?
Two strengths Erica had in her body paragraph are the use of transition words and having a topic sentence that grabs the readers attention.
Erica could have elaborated more on her sentences and it doesn't seem she has any direction. The paragraph is all over the place.
In my future career, I may need to compose an effective paragraph when I'm communicating to patients about a procedure or providing information about a health issue in writing?