Essay:
This essay compares the electoral systems of two countries and the general effects they have on representation.
Thesis:
Through differences in their respective electoral systems, the German Government is more representative of the citizens' interests than the American Government which mostly represents the interests of multinational corporations.
Please comment on the structure or flow of my essay should be.
In other words how should the essay and thus argument unfold itself? Specific in that would you (in a general sense) introduce and conclude the essay?
Please include any additional suggestions/critiques/insight as it would be very much appreciated.
Cite the resources used using APA format.