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In my mind, there are two experience is let me have different opinions and thoughts about photography is. Can understand the two is let me the most profound memory.

Which two experiences are respectively from two photographers: Guy Bourdin and Tillmans Wolfgangs, and the same is both experience from two years ago for the first time when he saw their works, like it very much, very infection, very excited, only a thought in your mind: I imagine that picture.

Guy Bounrdin was the first to open my understanding of fashion photographer, looking at the Guy Bounrdin works before I don't think I will enjoy the fashion photography. I think fashion photography is just business cooperation. First time to see Guy Bounrdin works in his official home page, I saw from his fashion photography and lively image narrative, storytelling and display image is more important than the product (information). Famous stories and surreal aesthetic hint that he fundamentally broken the traditional commercial photography and relentless perfectionist and sharp sense of humor.

He invented the biggest effect of color photography to create dramatic accents and strong color saturation and texture in the works.
Simple, that is the first time I realized the fashion photography is "fun" "interesting", "lively" "color", also after I pay attention to fashion photography and understand fashion photography gave me great influence and inspiration.

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