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I think Paula's project is one of the best. The work represents basic design solution for many american houses. I like this simpleness. Very well drawn perspective looks vivid (alive?). It feels like woman on the background invites you to come in and someone has just been drinking coffee and reading a book. Especially I would notice a fantastic shading. The shape of the table's leg that we see in front is created by shading only. This is great. There are not so many works with lighting bulb here. It's simple as if has to be according to design idea. Also I think that central line (corner) is more to the right is a good idea and the drawing have an advantage in composition because of it.