(1) BusComm employees will receive an “appreciation” vacation day in 2017. (2) We want to recognize the best team of employees in the company’s past history. (3) Specifically, your leaders are commemorating your extra effort to achieve the highest sales numbers ever. (4) Therefore, you will definitely enjoy your bonus day. (5) You may use your extra vacation day during most months this year, with the approval of your supervisor. (6) However, you may not take your bonus day during October because of our holiday production schedule. (7) We have attached a copy of our vacation request form. (8) It must be submitted at least one month before your requested date. (9) Also, it is important to write “bonus day” in the “reason” box. (10) We thank you in advance for your continued hard work.
A) Which sentence contains a pair of words that are redundant? Rewrite the sentence effectively.
B) Which sentence uses passive voice? Rewrite the sentence effectively.
C) What is the style problem in Sentence 6? Rewrite the sentence effectively.