Argumentative Research Essay
(I have attached my rough draft, but it wasn't good enough! I need help fixing it up. This is my final essay!!!)
This is an announcement of what you will do. It's not a thesis. Replace this with a thesis. Always avoid making announcement, but do include a good thesis. Once you have included a thesis of the position of the topic that the essay addresses, then make sure the rest of the essay fully supports that thesis.
Make sure all topic sentences support the essay's thesis and that all information in each paragraph supports that paragraph's topic sentence.
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