Read the following document and then analyze the strengths and/or weaknesses of the document. Revise the document so that it complies with the guidelines stated in the textbook. Letter of inquiry:
Dear MyStone, I have recently received a very attractive job offer from the Langston Company. But before I let them know one way or another; I would like to consider any offer your firm may offer. I was very excited during my interview to learn about your opportunity at MyStone.
And, I would be thrilled to start my career there. I don't mean to pressure you, but Langston Company has asked for my decision within 10 days.
Could you let me know by Tuesday whether you plan to offer a job? That would give me enough time to compare the two offers.