Assignment
The short paper activity for this module entails the revision of a specific business communication message. For this assignment, read the following email draft and:
• Analyze the strengths and weaknesses of each sentence.
• Revise the message so that it follows the guidelines outlined in your textbook.
• Utilize the 8 steps to enhance the clarity of the message (Bovée&Thill, 2018, pp. 160-162).
The message was written by the marketing manager of an online retailer of baby products in the hope of becoming a retail outlet for Inglesina strollers and high chairs. As a manufacturer of stylish, top-quality products, Inglesina (based in Italy) is extremely selective about the retail outlets through which it allows its products to be sold.