Problem
Analyze specific writing choices in "Monster Culture" in order to make an insightful argument regarding the effectiveness of the author's argument. You should aim to not only characterize the strength of the writer's argument via your analyses of the writer's choices but also to evaluate the writer's stance and the significance of the writer's choices.
Formal Draft. This draft will expand on what you started in your preliminary draft. Again, don't worry about nailing down a perfect thesis, but you should begin to attempt some kind of argument. This draft can be however long you choose, but it would be useful to try for at least two pages. Use my feedback and anything you might have learned from class or homework to develop your essay further. It might be helpful to use this draft to try to gather the loose, disorganized ideas from your preliminary draft and shape them into a more formal attempt at your finished essay.