Amanda Hanley's Essay-
What is the main point of this essay?
What is the greatest strength of this essay?
Does the introduction grab your interest and make you want to read on? Explain your answer.
What material does not seem to fit the main point of the essay or does not seem to be appropriate for the audience?
Where should the author add more details or examples? Explain your answer.
Where is the writing unclear or vague?
What is your favorite part of this piece of writing?
What other comments can you provide for the author?