Read the two paragraph below the write abrief paragraph 150 words in which you do the following.
-identify which paragraph was more effective and analyze why this is so
-include a disscussion of sentence variety and rhythm of the author writing focus on the writing the opinions given
-underline your topic sentence
1.A lot of people don't have a will.Everyone needs a will,but not all people have one.Wills are important because they explain who gets your stuffafter you die.You don't want your things going to someone you don't want them to go to.My Aunt Martha went a lawyer to get a will, I did mine on line.My dad died in 1988.He didn't have a will.His stuff went to my stepmother,who I don't get along with.If he would have had a will,I might have been able to start college sooner.But my dad didn't have a will.a will is a good to have and you need to get one.Do you have a will?
2.Most consumers understand that a good credit score is vital to one's finanical security and stability.Many people may understand how a credit score is calculated.Payment history account for roughly 35% of one's overall score.This means that one-time payments are absolutlly essentail.Debt level is is not far behind at 30%.This accounts for near limits and the total amount of money owe.Length of credit history come next at 15%.followed by inquiries at 10% and mixed credit at 10%.