Question: Flabby Expressions and Long Lead-ins
Revises the following to eliminate flabby expressions
a) We are sending a revised proposal at this time due to the fact that building costs have jumped at a considerable rate.
b) In the normal course of events, we would seek additional funding; however, in view of the fact that rates have increased, we cannot.
c) In very few cases has it been advisable for us to borrow money for a period of 90 or fewer days.
d) Inasmuch as our Web advertising income is increasing in a gradual manner, we might seek a loan in the amount of $50,000.
e) Despite the fact that we have had no response to our bid, we are still available in the event that you wish to proceed with your building project.