Post 1:
What was your favorite document you drafted and why? What did you learn from drafting that document? What would you do differently in the future when drafting such a document?
Post 2:
What was your least favorite document you drafted and why? What did you learn from drafting that document? What would you do differently in the future when drafting such a document?
Please do the corrections that the professor is requesting for this assignment
Great legal drafting here! Your caption and heading for the Stipulation were perfectly done. I do have some suggestions/corrections for your employment contract with Gordon Ramsay and the Bravo Network. First, you need to add heading sections to your contract. That would be a proper format for an employment contract. Please see the sample on page 267 in your textbook for an example of the headings that you could use and how to incorporate them. Second, in the signature lines, you need to name Gordon Ramsay as opposed to "Kitchen Haven Actor" and you should properly name Bravo as the Bravo Network on the signature line. You has some spacing issues on the date lines too. You did do very well getting all of the provisions in the directions into your contract. Your Deed was in good form, but I do have suggestions/corrections there as well. In the beginning paragraph (preamble) you give Barrack and Michelle's names and the Bush's names all following by, sign...... . I am not sure why those are there. I suggest that you take those out and you need to add proper signature lines at the end of the Deed. Only Barrack and Michelle would sign as Grantors. You should also add two signatures lines for Witnesses to witness their signing. All of those are suggestions/corrections that you should make and track/redline your changes pursuant to the Drafting Project.