Assignment:
You have to totoally revise this paper uder these instrucitons: sub title for each: 1.introduction 2.case study 3. case study 4. conclusion and 5.bibliography
Each case study should cover two countries where the same commodities could have different consequences for the country. case1 and case2 should write seperately , commodities and countries mentioned should also be different in these two cases.
for introduction and conclusion, you should summarize your major arguments and findings.
You have to mainly revise introduction and conclusion, you have to delet all bull shit sentences, the intro and conclusion should summarize the major arguments and findings of this paper, and should cover both two case studies which the paper i attached doesn't have. Conclusion, delete the one I have, the conclusion should restate the major arguments and findings of this paper. Moreover, You have to revise the case one totally, because it should not be like this talking a lot about bull shit. You have to talk more on why venezuala and america have same commodity :oil, but so different consequence in two countries. delete all the subtitles uder the case1. Or you may find other two countries for case 1 and write a same commodity for these two different countries if you can. and do the same thing on revising case2. I need the whole paper to be revised perfectly under these requirements. and no other quotations from other articles. use the articles link in bibiliography page.
Attachment:- Summarize the major arguments and findings.rar