Assignment:
Question 1. Letter Feedback A colleague in another department heard that you are enrolled in a writing course and asks for your help in revising a letter he has drafted for a client. Being the caring and helpful person you are, you agree to look it over. When you receive the draft, you can see that it needs a lot of work. Since you have already agreed to help him, you cannot back out because that would be unethical.
Read the letter below carefully; then write a response to your colleague. Your response should be a quality example of business communication.
Lenexa Corp.
123 N. 15 Ave.
Phoenix, AZ 85111
Kyle Killiam
456 Hilldale Ct.
Phoenix, AZ 85777
May 1st
Hi Kyle,
I no its been a while since we met to review your companies needs. I would like to sit up a time to get to gether in the next few weeks so that we can review your needs.
I have a lot of new products and prograsm available and I think they could be a good fit for you guys.
I called last week, but you didn't respond. Ill be calling you early next week to set something up. I look forward to speaking with you and appreciate your business.
You can call me anytime at 602-555-5555.
Thanks man,
Jason Green
Jason