Assignment:
1. Reviewer question: What is the author's thesis?
2. Reviewer question: Is the thesis clearly stated? If not, how would you help the writer restate it?
3. Reviewer question: Does the essay's body stick to the main topic? If not, where does it digress, and how could the writer revise the paper to make it stay more on the main topic?
4. Reviewer question: Does the paper contain any ambiguously-worded or confusing sentences? Please list them below and offer a suggested revision for each one you identify.
5. Reviewer question: Which closing strategy did the writer use? Is the closing effective? Why or why not? Offer a revision suggestion for making the closing more effective.
6. Reviewer question: Please give the writer feedback regarding the essay's effect on you.